Is there anything better than lying down in the hot sun with a cold, delicious, mouth watering (asyndeton) chocolate chip cookie dough ice cream relaxing your mind and forgetting about all hardships in life. The moment your tongue touches the ice cream, your heart melts. As your taste buds cherish the amazing flavor of the ice cream, it gets even better. Chunks of cookie dough begin to overtake you and leave you in pure awe and amazingness, encouraging you to get another scoopful of chocolate chip cookie dough, wishing it would never end. Go out and try it, you will never regret it.
Let us all take a moment and thank the wonderful Ben & Jerry's (ethos) for coming up with such a heavenly flavor of ice cream. A famous quote by Cicero, he said "One should eat to live, not live to eat." (chiasmus) Chocolate chip cookie dough contradicts this quote. The point of life is not to live by eating healthy, but to cherish every single food you desire, and I guarantee you there is not one person who would turn down chocolate chip cookie dough. As a kid, i thought i would never find love, until my taste buds met the beautiful chocolate chip cookie dough flavor.
Shahe, the use of exuberant use of colorful adjectives leaves any reader's mouth watering. Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough is actually incredibly delicious, great choice. Well written, kept me interested throughout the entire article. giving credit to the creators of this flavor was a clever idea. Overall this passage was solid, but the chiasmus was not a chiasmus and there were a couple grammatical errors. Good job!
ReplyDeleteShahe, chocolate chip cookie dough ice cream is by far the most marvelous edible creation known to man. I appreciate the extreme use of descriptive words; they allowed me to actually picture the delightful event of eating the ice cream. I also share the same devotion towards this particular flavor.
ReplyDeleteCookies and Cream ice cream is my second favorite flavor of ice cream. The fact that it is not only ice cream, but also chocolate chips and cookie dough makes this flavor hard to dislike. The flavor that includes Oreo chunks is also a mouth watering flavor which is, again, liked by almost everyone. Great choice Shahe.
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